Hi! I´ve been tweaking my website and would love to get some feedback to see if it´s clear what I do, :) . Tx https://www.publicpersona.eu/
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- @Jess Gonzalez Hi Jess, I was thinking that if you removed the circular shape from your logo, that would optimise the header space, so your logo could then move up. You could change 'Public Persona Coaching' logo to a dark green, have the background of your top nav area as a very light grey and remove lower grey line completely
- @Danny Robinson thanks! I know I can still simplify more but it´s a start! :)
- @Jess Gonzalez Hi Jess, love the changes. So much cleaner now!
- @Danny Robinson I´ve receiving a lot of feedback and I do appreciate honesty.
- @Jess Gonzalez Thank you for reading my response. Didn't want to come off too harsh.
- @Hemi Smith cheers! :)
- @Danny Robinson thank you so much for taking the time to really give me feedback, this is super useful. Thanks a lot! Will definitely apply these changes!
- Hi Jess, nice looking site overall, however I'd personally keep the quotation headings the same throughout, and also the page headings to keep a continuity for each."do you want to become a confident speaker without stress?" I'd make larger to really and a thinner font to emphasize the point, as well as "Hi! I'm Jess, a colourful, curious, dynamic individual and the human behind Public Persona."Also, under "Are you underselling yourself or your business?" would change the black background to a green (again for consistency) or remove colour entirely and have icons and text in green against a white background. If boxes are kept then some padding is required under this section too.Under 'COMPANIES WE´VE WORKED WITH' make each company box the same size and spacing apart, and tints (maybe 50%) of the green for some areas for a more friendly feel.
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