Open and simple question: “What are your thoughts, comments and questions re: this project?” (Open to your criticism)
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- Hey @Mofe Demuren!Echoing what @Alex Joseph and @Helen Kawagama have to say here - really powerful photos, but would love to know more about the message you are trying to send with these images. I think some more information, guiding us through these photos should help :)I think personally, I would also love to see more of a variety of photos as well - I can see some powerful portraits in there doing really well.Hope this helps and amazing work!Cathy x
- @Helen Kawagama Thank you for your comment Helen! Definitely a topic worth thinking about in terms of creative direction and narrative building. I’ll look into it
- @Alex Joseph Thank you for your comment Alex! I’ll definitely take that on board when editing or with my next photography project.
- Hi Mofe. What's the message behind these powerful pictures? I find them to be powerfully evocative to look at, however, there's no further story or narrative to perceive here. The copy 'Unscripted. Unseen. Unforgotten.' is a strong statement.If you could expand on that further it would be really cool to see!
- Hi Mofe Who is your audience? Even though its Lagos it could also be any coastal location in Africa. What makes it special?
- This project: Check out LAGOS. Not as you expected. on The Dots! https://www.the-dots.com/projects/269776
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