Hello, I recently updated my portofolio and I am looking for some feedback, especially on the typography.
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- @Stefan Vallance Thank you! That was really insightful and helpful. Thanks for taking your time to look at the details! Really appreciate it!
- This is really nice work! You show off the foundational and experimental aspects of your creative work nicely.As you're showing expertise in typography, I think it's important that you go further than most to prove perfection with your words. I spotted a few things that could be refined:- Widows: Always a pain to rectify but I've noticed quite a lot of single-word lines.- Kerning: Be mindful to kern your titles, these are the largest spaces of text so it shows when you haven't treated these.- I wonder if you could bring even more clarity to your contents page; you emboldened the number '1' on the page, and I think applying this treatment to the rest of the numbers will help with legibility.Overall these are minor points but clients and employers will be extra critical of your typographic applications so make sure you're content you've thought of everything! Keep up the great work (:
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