Wrote a story and need some constructive feedback?

Question

Do you know what a Critical Reader is? No?

Imagine you finished writing your book or short-story. You show it to friends and family and they say its great, but you know they're biased and you need constructive feedback on the manuscript before sending it out for angents and publishers.

What you need is a Critical Reader! This' someone who will carefully analyse your story. They'll avaluate story structure, character development, aligngment to audience/market and suggest how some of these things can be improved.

They are NOT the grammar police or copy editors. Their job is to provide you with perspective and storytelling advice.

Could you revise your story structure yourself? Maybe, but the lack of perspective after writing something can really blind you for its issues.

(I'm writing my own book right now and I'm 100% going to pay a Critical Reader to rip it to shreds lol I'm joking, they are gentle with their feedback)

Now, independent writers, if all of that sounds good to you. I have great news!

First: hi, I'm Lívia, a writer and communicator, with 5.5 years of experience and as a copy, essay and scriptwriter for short-films, commercials and content. And what I learned with these jobs was what makes a good story.

To the good news. I want to become a Critical Reader and to get my portfolio going, meet new people and put myself out there, I'M OFFERING MY WORK FOR FREE.

If you have a fiction book, short story or a script, I'd love to read it, analyse it and give you a beautiful report on it. All for zero money.

My favourite genres are Horror, Thrillers, Noirs and Suspense. But I also enjoy and a nice Romance, Rom-Com and Drama.

I look forward to hearing from your stories. Cheers!