Hello. I have added content to my major project, Sweetcycle. I would really appreciate some feedback on it!

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  • @col dixon Thank you for your recommendation! I do not have them but it would be great to try it out. I originally wanted to use a more geometric typeface but I chose the rounded (quicksand) as it was coherant with the logo and artwork. I have been advised to keep my current font but change the hierachy so I will be experimenting with this as well!
  • @Phoebe Watts I would try something like Silka.

    https://www.atipofoundry.com/fonts/silka in Heavy, Black and Bold and use Silka Mono https://www.atipofoundry.com/fonts/silka-mono for the body and sub titles.

    If you don't have them, let me know and I'll give them too you.
  • @col dixon Thanks for your feedback and kind words!

    I will have a look at other fonts and see what creates more contrast :)
  • Beautiful work @Phoebe Watts my only comment would be on the rounded font you've used. The art direction, pallette and the iconography could of done with a much heavier font to have created a juxtaposition.

    The layout and presentation are fantastic though and I was looking at it and thinking, this is the work of a juniour, are you sure? This looks like a seniors work because it's so cohesive and tight.

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