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Hello! I would love to have some constructive feedback on my portfolio/website. Does anyone have a few spare minutes? Thank you

https://joanareis.myportfolio.com/
Joana Reis
Joana Reis
Junior Graphic Designer

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  • Joana Reis
    Joana Reis
    Junior Graphic Designer
    @Piero Fioretti That is such a great feedback, Piero! Thank you so much. I will consider everything you are suggesting for me to do. :)
  • Piero Fioretti
    Piero Fioretti
    FX Artist
    @Joana Reis Works are awesome!

    Maybe one thing you can consider changing are some of the descriptions inside the single page of the work you did.
    I'm watching the website from a 32" screen and they are not immediatly visible. It's all filled by the first images which take all the available space.
    For example in the "BLACK SOCKS FETISH PROJECT", the short line describing the project would be more useful at the top, right under the name of the project in order to give some kind of context. At least, that's what I think could be useful.

    One very little (very little) thing also is the missing icon in the browser tab. For example in Chrome every page has a little icon denoting it. Like linkedin or facebook or The Dots itself.
    Maybe a little recognizable logo related to you can make the tab "more attractive".
  • Esteban Loeschbor
    Esteban Loeschbor
    Industrial Designer
    Very cool. dont know what else to say really. the design its simple and elegant ... the illustrations are cool and description of projects seem also simple but complete. congrats
  • Joana Reis
    Joana Reis
    Junior Graphic Designer
    @Lucas Maniez Thank you so much for taking the time, Lucas. It means a lot to me! I will put all your feedback into action! :)
  • Lucas Maniez
    Lucas Maniez
    Brand Designer & Artistic Director
    First of all, great works! I love your illustrations, they're brilliant!

    Here are what, IMHO, could benefit from some rework:
    - The title, instead of saying "welcome to my portfolio", I would recommend introducing yourself briefly (name + what you do)
    - The scroll invitation is a nice thought, but since your work appears on more than 60% of the screen height, I believe it is not necessary, and you could use that space instead to say who you work for! It's a great way for potential clients to grasp if you could be a fit
    - In your case studies, the only thing I would change is moving up the information related to the project. Giving context is key to appreciation!

    I hope this helps, keep it up you're doing great! :)

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