Hey, I've just updated my website and was wondering if anyone was able to give me some feedback on it please?

My website was in dire need of an update and i just finished doing some work on it, I know the mobile look of it needs some work but wondering of the desktop verison of it looks.
www.jakewarrengreen.com

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  • @Jake Green No problem. Generally I like the simple stand out design and how you showcase your work first. I was just nitpicking a couple of things that stood out to me but it wasn't a big criticism, just what I would do to make it even better.
    Best of luck. :)
  • Get rid of the HOME on the tab. It would be better to just be your name both for audience but also SEO.

    Not sure I personally like the black space at the bottom of the main image on the Home screen. It seems like either the main image doesn't reach to the bottom, or you are missing a footer. I understand it has the 1/3 option to see which photo is being displayed but I find it pointless and a waste of website space that confuses.
  • @Thérèse B. Thank you so much for having a look and giving me some feedback, I’ll get onto them now
  • Hi Jake,
    I see a lot of nice work on your site.

    Some quick comments:
    • Home /Many use their personal link/nic/title for their site to function as their 'Home' button. Today it's more for social media sites, like here that to use the 'Home' option and then for our 'personal' profile.

    • Like your use of full screen header as starter.

    The menu: I get a little confussed by your choice to not use the full screen for the menu. Feels almost as the site is adjusted to older displays format.

    You project pages: Maybe one step/click to many? The second and third/full screen level is quite close.

    Digtal & Film as categories: If you want to tell that you shoot both digital and analog, I would maybe tell that in tech comments or mentioning on the 'About' page that I shoot both analog and digital. To many Film stands for moving images.

    Good luck with your studies!
    // Thérèse

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