Hi! I would love to have feedback on my portfolio and see what I can change/add on/remove! My website is: http://fatimahersi.com Thanks!
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- @James Goodwin Davies Hi James,I appreciate the feedback so much! Definitely going take this all into consideration and and implement these into my website!Thank you so much! :)
- Hey Fatima. I think it might be worth exploring adding a descriptive or emotive word to you project titles, I.e. instead of ‘wedding invite’ put ‘beautiful wedding invites’ or ‘welcoming wedding invite’. On a more practical perspective: your logo makes it look like there’s two menus on mobile. Try removing the horizontal lines on the top left of your logo to avoid this. Also when you click ‘about me’ on the menu it takes you to a page where you have to then click a thumbnail again to visit your about me section. Try to overcome this. You could do with some spellchecking and grammar fixing on you about me. Copy and paste the content into something like ‘Grammarly’. Finally on your contact page I’d remove the blurb.
- @Marcelina Slabuszewska Hi Marcelina!Thank you so much for the feedback, I’ll definitely consider this and try making some changes to my portfolio!I do have an about me section as I wanted my work to be the first thing on display, but maybe I can try this, and also implement the advice of adding my process onto the side! Great idea!Thank you so much once again! :)
- Hiya Fatima, I'd love to read a short and sweet intro about you on the main page, and then more detailed one on the about me page. You're showcasing your work nicely, great mockups/photos. You could add another layer to projects by sharing your process or sketches. Maybe it's worth trying to stylize the project thumbnail photos so they form a beautiful composition on the main page.Hope that helps at all!
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