Hiya. I have updated my website and would like to get some feedback. Am I missing anything and how is the layout/navigation.

I havent got a domain name and wil get that in the future.
https://adamwenhamart.wixsite.com/website

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  • Hi Adam,

    I assume this is first time you do your site and I think it's a great start. A few things:

    - your logo doesn't really feel aligned with the aesthetic of your work
    - it would need a bit bigger breathing space between sections, fi. under the logo and section 3 top
    - I feel like you could leave bigger space to your work, having more full screen images like https://www.felipepantone.com/
    - I would suggest having a contact menu instead of having in the footer
  • I think it's looking good Adam but a couple of quick easy wins I'd suggest:

    Purchase their 'light' plan £9pm Wix to remove their banner at the top - it will look much more professional with that removed!

    In terms of the navigation at the top - I'd make it semi bold or bold weight and use a darker grey as this currently would fail accessibilty guidelines (WCAG), this free tool is great: https://coolors.co/contrast-checker/112a46-acc8e5

    I'd be tempted to 'introduce' both Golden Fragments and Nocturnal with a paragraph of copy (in a decent size semi bold or bold Poppins font) that will give the artworks (which are wonderful) more breathing room away from the main title.

    On the About page 'maybe' add a video of you creating one of these pieces, showing the process rather than a static photo?

    Final thing, if these pieces are for sale - I'd like to see the name of each piece plus physical size, materials used, and price underneath each.

    Good luck!

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