I've recently just made my uni project website( online mag) and would love some feedback, what works and what could be improved. Thank you

Link: https://www.wix.com/feedback-ng/feedback/73a42e07-a10e-4d0b-9dba-4ed415e8b0ab


Feel free to either leave comment on dots or on the website :) I want to improve it as it still in working process

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  • First of all - I think it's amazing that you've created this for uni!

    The style is great, some images a little pixelated, so I would think about replacing those and there are a few type inconsistencies - but it looks like such a great start and you should be really proud of yourself, to be honest!

    I do agree with Dhruve's comments but definitely ask again once you've populated the site a bit more but maybe think of a slogan (a short line that tells you what this is all about and what you're trying to do)

    hope this was helpful x
  • @Dhruve Shah thank you so much for this feedback I will take all these notes and work on the page again!
  • @Shyanne Bushay I had a quick look. I think the first thing you should have a look at is the size of your images (possibly). The homepage takes quite a while to load, and I'm first greeted with a black image on a black background. Is this intended, as it just looks like something on the page hasn't loaded properly.

    Maybe because of that top block not loading, it's also not clear what the site is for when you first get to it. Maybe it's worth bringing the about page to be the first section of the homepage.

    There's also an empty white banner at the top, which I wasn't sure if intended, or there's meant to be promotional text there?

    I would also think about responsiveness, as when I made my screen smaller, it didn't shrink the content or go into a mobile view.

    I like the fonts and colours a lot!
    I hope this helps
  • @Joseph Osayande thank you so much for trying, I have attached a new link: https://spaceezine.wixsite.com/otherzine
  • @Victoria Charalambides thank you so much, I’ve only just seen this. I have attached a new link: https://spaceezine.wixsite.com/otherzine
  • @Dhruve Shah hi thank you for letting me know, I had attached a new link : https://spaceezine.wixsite.com/otherzine

  • Same as Joseph and Victoria. I see a loader, which just spins for a while, before getting this error, 'There was a technical issue while saving this change. Please refresh the page and try again.'

    It looks like you need a different link to share a preview of the site.

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