Just finished my online portfolio/ website, any feedback would be greatly appreciated!
I'm a recent illustration post graduste and I've just finished making my first portfiolio/ professional website. I'm open to any and all feedback : https://www.studiojonesy.com/
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- @Annabelle Baugh Thanks Annabelle, I've just send over an email!
- @Nahid Hasan Do you have any suggestions on how to do that?
- Looks awesome, I woul put a link to your Etsy shop on the main page with something like, Like my art, buy it and liven up your own walls. I would also change some of the wording in the about me section. Let me know if you need any help with this. Creating engaging and compelling content about you will be easy! Email me at acbcopywriter@gmail.com if you want to have a chat.
- Good but need to more interactive and smart.
- @Erin Jones Hello again. I went thru ur portfolio and I think the changes r great. If I am nit picking, I would change the wording of ur paragraph on ur talk in the conference."UCLan invited me, Dom and Ryan to talk about our collaborative project, Barron's Blood. We are the first ever students to do a presentation at Conference Week, and I'm the youngest person to do a talk at the show""To do" is repeated several times. There is a great app for checking grammatical error and sentence flow called "grammarly" I totally recommend it for professional writing and editing. Even for emails with clients etc.
- @Georgia Addy Thank 's Georgia! And sure
- Love love love the bankrupted collection, the colour palette compliments the aesthetic of the illustrations superbly with its “modern retro” technique. For me the beach scene tote bag placement works a lot better than the lady, although the vinyl collection is very well fitting and would suit gorgeously as a feature piece
- I’ve just uploaded mine too, feedback for feedback?
- @Mariam Hobeldin Thanks for your feedback! I've just re-updated my website, everything it much brighter and simpler now.If you have the time, let me know what you think of the update?
- I love your illustrations so vibrant and colorful. I agree with the previous comments. The brown does take away from your work. Another thing I noticed is that your information in the about section is cut off at the end when viewed from my phone. Make sure your website is popping up correctly on different devices. :) keep up the great work.
- @Anna Pietrangeli That's a great idea! I just went with the pallete the website creator picked out for me without even thinking about how it'd effect the overall look.Thanks for your feedback!
- @Alessandra FasoliThank you Alessandra, I'll see if I can fingure out how to change the menu, I love your suggestions!And that's a good point to move the personal projects to the main page, I just didn't want it to feel too crowded.Thanks for your advice, it's much appericated!
- Hi Erin,your illustration style is gorgeous. For the online portfolio I just felt the dark brown didn't do justice to the colours you use in your drawings, to reflect the style I would probably pick a palette of two/three colours from your own drawings and use it on the website graphics too. :)Keep it up and all the best!
- Very nice style! I would personally chance the nav menu of the desktop version "more" as just "about" and maybe the email can be the classic envelope icon?I would also move the personal projects to be just a separate section on your home page, so that they are visibile to people directly (some of them are really nice!)Anyway, good job, and good luck!
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