Finished setting up my website and would appreciate any feedback :) https://oliviamariefoster.com/
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- Hi Olivia,Thank you for sharing your work, here are a few comments, I hope it helps:I agree with not being sure the circle animation fits with the homepage, maybe because it looks too playful against the rest of the elements, maybe moving it to the About page would work better.In terms of the way you show the work in the other pages, I would find a way to centre the thumbnails and tweak the spaces in between, at the moment I see some pages aligned left and looks odd, I think your work is great, and I would even suggest making some of the images bigger to see the details.Another thing I would consider is how much copy length you are having in your descriptions, I would shorten these (the average sentence length is around 20–25 words) that will make it easier to read but also look tidier.I like how simple and clean your site looks,Good luck :D
- Not sure about the home page circle thing - it didn’t seem to match the rest of the site which was a bit more serious. It seemed a bit incongruous? Thought the work/portfolio pages were really excellent- the photos and descriptions were really good.
- Hello OliviaI like your Homepage. It has sense of humour!My way of thinking, with all respect, is that you could keep the same homepage typography on the other pages Research and About.Also would be nice your portrait (photo or illustration)best regards!
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