Graduating soon and would love to hear some feedback on my portfolio website Let's start a crit session, would be happy to give back :)

https://chloeramli.com/

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  • @Ryan Hughes hey! Thanks so much for help, really appreciate this :') I'll definetly try to see my options and homepage and great tip for adding sketches x
  • Hi Chloe,

    First off, great work on getting a portfolio together! It takes time, patience and effort to get something out there! A few observations:

    1) The font you've chosen for your front page is difficult to read, and will be difficult for people with dyslexia, and other visual impairments. There are some awesome gothic fonts out there that are simpler that you can use, check out Google Fonts, they have new fonts being added everyday that are accessible and creative.

    2) Your cover photo on your homepage doesn't seem to be present in your project pages - pick one of your standout graphics to go on your homepage so that your clients can see what you offer immediately without having to click to find out!

    3) The project pages have a very wide span (I'm viewing on very high resolution screen) and so I am concerned about what mobile viewers are able to see. I would recommend bringing in the margins on your project pages to make them more concise.

    Great starting point, and good luck!
  • Really slick Chloe, you should be really proud. Only a few things from a personal point of view;
    a) are you able to set your homepage up to get an alt typeface for the project names when you hoover over a project (its a nice font to use jsut some people might find it hard to read.
    b) maybe some intial concept sketches just to show your thoughts/development.

    Your musuem of natural disasters project is outstanding; should be really proud.

    All the best,
    Ryan.

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