In the process of updating my website. Would love some feedback before the final update. https://www.kelsangdongsar.com/

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  • Had the quickest look (and it looks great, it looks like you have some excellent work on there), from the few seconds my eyes laid on it here are some observations

    - The initial look at the page could be enhanced to stand out more, rearrangement of the visuals so they can be seen straight away without scrolling the page
    - Your name is small and what you specialise is to it would be great to see this straight away
    - What you excel at is at the bottom of the page in small text, it could be enhanced by creating an 'About' page.

    Hope they help :)
  • Hi Kelsang,
    Congrats on building this so far!

    A few things I spotted:
    - Update your Favicon for the browser and keep an eye on the Page Title displaying for the user, you can change them in page settings in Squarespace (example Branding is showing as Gallery 1)
    - The text in your footer is displaying off centre for me
    - On the Fashion page there are no margins left and right of the main content block, so the headings are right up to the edge of the browser. The margin you added on the Branding page is better
    - For bullets make sure they are left-aligned (example the stats on the Superdry project). If you want to keep them centred then remove the bullet point.

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