Looking for feedback from The Dots gang on my branding project.
I have been working more with Cinema 4D, Photoshop and Illustrator for digital and print branding content. This project showcases my design services and my interest in specialised creative services within music.
I am very interested in seeing peoples feedback on my project so let me know what you think !
Full Project:
https://www.behance.net/gallery/146538699/Record-Label-Logos-Business-Cards
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- @Jamie Nichols Behance is tricky, the options are scarce so you need to be a bit inventive with the layout. I have been told multiple times that people needed to see sketches and processes (because from a recruiter point of view they need to see the ideation above the result). So I started gradualy to add more of those in my projects and they have a better response... Glad I could help!
- @Sandrine Bascouert Hey thank you Sandrine. This is some solid feedback to improve on the projects presentation for sure. Thank You ! <3
- I cannot really offer feedback on the project itself but here are my two cents on the Behance presentation.First of all, it's very neat looking and profesionnal. However, the text is super small!I would need to see more process, for example you should have used the grid feature to present your screenshots instead of composite them together in one image, that way people could click on them individually to enlarge each image. Also it would need a more in-depth explanation. Eg: try to descript what you have done to someone who is not 100% familiar with C4D. They would need some more input.(also I would have taken advatage of the black vinyl record to composite a logo on the label. As of now, it's all black and we don't really know what it means)But I really like how you arranged your mock ups at the beginning so the rest is just small tweaks!
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