Need feedback on my first website !!!

So I created my first website not long ago and I would really appreciate some honest feedback !! This is my website : https://asiart7.wixsite.com/website7 ☺️

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  • @Olufunke Omasan Thank you so much! :)
  • @ɐɹoᗡ ɐuu∀ ˥ I fixed the clouds and lowered the opacity so that the text is easier to read! Thank you so much for your feedback!!
  • @Alessandro Novelli I see what you mean about the prices, I removed them! And thank you, this helps a lot!
  • @Kojo Marfo Thank you for your advice I'm working on improving it right now !
  • Hello Asia,

    the first website is always tricky, here some ideas:

    Buy a real domin, remove WIX adv, with the domain get also the emails and switch it with the yahoo one.

    about the website: the clouds/background make the text difficult to read, create context for the projects, now are just images with no informations, descriptions or whatsoever. Remove the prices cause you are not a supermarket. Make your about relevant to possible clients, agencies, people who may want to hire you. Add past clients or testimonials for credibility. Answer to the question: Why should people hire you?, try to get in their shoes and work the website around this new perspective. What would you like to see on the website of someone you would like to hire?

    hope it makes sense and helps you

    cheers

    A
  • @Asia Volante you can upgrade this, Wix have great customer service. Request a call and speak with them and they will walk you through.
  • @Asia Volante Ah ok my bad it appears now. It would make sense in the future to buy an url tho it's fairly cheap.

    The website itself like fairly simple but your work is so intense on a great way that it gives a nice balance. Might the only thing that the cloud pattern in the background is blury so a higher resolution would be good.
  • @ɐɹoᗡ ɐuu∀ ˥ yeah I did it through Wix but I didn’t pay for the personal url thing so i can’t change the link and it will always show Wix basically !!

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