Would anyone be able to provide some feedback on my website, please? Would be greatly appreciated! oscarling-cottey.myportfolio.com
oscarling-cottey.myportfolio.com
Also, if anyone wishes to follow my Instagram page, you can find me here: instagram.com/oscartwork/ . I’ll be following everyone back. :)
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- @Arturo Rago I was thinking almost the same. I agree with these suggestions. Would be good to have some more context related to the projects.
- @Arturo Rago Hi Arturo. Thanks so much for your feedback, I really do appreciate it. I’ll be sure to take your thoughts on board and make those changes. All the best!
- @Ludovica Quaranta Thank you! They’re a combination of personal work and university projects. I haven’t been fortunate enough to find any work yet.
- Hi Oscar - I really like your work!From a purely UX perpective, here are a few - hopefully constructive - suggestions:- the landing page is a bit confusing: I'd remove the social media icons and add something like 'Enter' or a loading bar that takes the user to your main page as soon as the video animation is over- I like your work but I would like to know more about the story behind each project: how about adding a few lines on how it started, how you contributed, what your process was and what you learned?- I would consider merging 'artist manifesto' and 'mission statement' or somehow link them up.- I love the typography - it reflects your passion for drawing and illustrative work - but it makes it hard to read longer texts. A work-around would be to use it as a diplay font (for titles, bylines or paragraphs) and opt for a 'plainer' font for the main body.Hope this helps!Arturo
- I like the style/vibe of it! Are these personal projects ot client work?
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