Hello everyone! I'd love to get feedback on my new online portfolio " www.florianbellon.com " - What do you think about it?
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- Hi Florian, I agree this is great and I would increase the type size on the mobile site.
- @Florian Bellon Thank you, that's very kind! :)
- @Sasha Batt Thank you Sasha! You can find all the books and board games on www.helvetiq.com
- @JULIA ALLEN Hello Julia. Thank you for your feedback! It's really constructive to get a different point of view on my work, coming from a professional. I'll keep all this in mind for the next version :)
- Beautiful arts @Florian BellonWould it be possible to set up a shop page for the products you assisted on? Or links for visitors to navigate to where they can view?
- @Hajra Mubashar Thank you Hajra! I'm glad you like it. I checked your page - Very cool projects! Especially the collage artworks on the travel magazine.
- It's lovely Florian. Clean and easy to navigate. I love your brand identity project in particular.
- Hi Florian,You have a great illustration style but I find i'm distracted by looking at mockups of the work rather than the work itself. If I were you I would focus on the illustrations and get them as big as possible - its the most important part and it's currently hard to see the work in much detail without having to click on each image.I wouldn't show designs in mockup context so perhaps ask the client/agency to send you images of the work insitu - a PDF, photograph or a screengrab would all work well.Similarly my eyes go to the same crease details in the poster designs, and the pages of the book all being at the same angle, - i'm finding that takes away from your work. Trust your work to speak for itself.Lastly on the thumbnail view I would create a variety of scale so not everything is the same size. Reduce the amount of negative space surrounding each element will help - and zoom in and show details within your work - that way we get to see the skill and craft that has gone into it.Hope that's helpful.Good Luck! Julia
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