Hello, looking for feedback on my illustration portfolio https://drive.google.com/file/d/1bwtLRd-au-Jr8GUWovYhWSXOrMR4P7vk/view?usp=sharing
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- hey @Megan Fry thank you so much for looking at my portfolio and leaving feedback. A fresh set of eyes and your amazing eye for detail and spelling mistakes (whoops!) has definitely helped ♡
- Hey @Zoë Bonham , thank you for taking the time to look at my portfolio and responding and giving really thorough feedback too- it means a lot! It's helpful to get a fresh pair of eyes to look at it and I will deffo take on what you've said ♡
- @Natalie Adkins Yay, all good now!Your work is absolutely stunning, and you show such a wide breadth of styles and skills which is amazing. I just so adore your chunky people illustrations - they are incredible!There's a couple of things I've noticed - firstly, I'm dying to know more about your self-initiated projects. There's some lovely images, but no details of context of what they are and why you did them. I think showing your enthusiasm in this way will definitely get more of your personality and amibition across!Secondly, I'd love to see more of the outputs for Noodoll. It feels like there is so much more to this project than you are showing that I think could make it even stronger, for example showing the website and email designs in more detail and the animations you mentioned!Of course this is all subjective so take on board what you like (or not!). As a full portfolio of work its so impressive but I'd definitely think about fine tuning your portfolio for if and when you apply for specific jobs! For example, the children's illustration or presentation work may not be relevant for food or drink packaging and vice versa!Hope this helps,Zoe
- Hey Natalie!First off, I LOVE your work - it's so beautiful, highly detailed and the execution is *smacks lips* perfection!The only pieces of advice I would say is to:Increase the space between your lines on pages 2 (hello and paragraph text) 3 (between the educational facility and your achievement).Perhaps decrease the line length along with making sure each page is consistent i.e. align all the text to the left.Lastly, I noticed on page 21 that you've missed the letter 'I' at the start.I hope this helps and doesn't seem too picky - it's honestly wonderful work, keep it up! <3
- @Zoë Bonham Maybe that's where I've been going wrong all along. I've updated the access ♡ https://drive.google.com/file/d/1bwtLRd-au-Jr8GUWovYhWSXOrMR4P7vk/view?usp=sharing
- Having troubles viewing your portfolio, it seems like you haven't made this public access!
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