Hi. Can I please have some feedback regarding my website & CV? Any comments are welcome. Thanks. https://www.martinshaffu.com/

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  • I saw your national birds project I’d recommend taking the name on the actual illustrations off as you already have it written below as well so your pretty much duplicated every single name and title of each bird and perhaps use one of the birds as the project pic let the illustrations be the go ual point reconnect stop using bold typography
  • Hi Martin, really enjoyed your projects and your level of craft is great. The series of birds, flags, players are really strong. I’d say if you have time look to push one or two projects a bit more.. be more expressive in what you’re trying to convey... ie with the birds.. are they all rare? What’s the message? What would they look like if they were all in the same illustration... make more of the backgrounds to tell a story.. think of things like the New Yorker magazine covers. All the best, J

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