Hi guys! I’ve just posted my first project here on The Dots. Please stop by and take a look. I’m grateful for any feedback! Thank you
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- Overall is a great job, love the illustration and the photographs. In terms of branding; I get to see the "THE" and the illutration of the dog, which makes me immediately think "The Dog" would be the name of the brand. So I would see how to incorporate the full brand name to make it a bit clearer.
- @Kojo Marfo thanks. I checked your projects now those are some things to be proud of. Respect for raising awareness of social issues. Keep up the good work!
- admirable. You should be proud
- @Louise Marley Thank you for your kind words. This job was really close to my heart it was hard to let it go. I just couldn’t stop drawing dogs.
- Really great work, there is alot of personality in the illustrations and the continuous line art style works well against the brown paper products :)
- @Olesya Chernyavskaya Thank you!
- @Mauricio Munoz It was helpful thank you. I’m gonna go back and play with the THE part for sure.The different variations were only to give a few choices to the client. They’re probably gonna go with the one where the dog stands on two legs.Thanks again for your reply.
- really nice illustration, love its charater and simplicity, however in terms of branding, it would help to be more cohesive and stick to one style of illustration. In terms of brandmark, first thing i read is "the" and from a distance i would interpret it as "the dog", I think the incorportation of the name could be further explore and definitively outside the "the" letters to improve legibility.food for thought. hope it's helpful.
- @Aiman Ishak Thank you!
- Looks great! Love the stamp design most in particular.
- I think it's nice!
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