Hi, I'm just looking for constructive feedback for a personal brand
https://www.behance.net/gallery/117839901/KOAN21
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- @Mattias Blomberg Thank you it was really insightful :)
- Overall, great work! The attention to detail is mind-blowing, and examples of uses as well. Perhaps a few too many examples, though. It kind of gets in the way of the essence of your branding. You could easily leave out half of it, and it would probably emerge even stronger for it. Having said that, I personally enjoyed keeping on scrolling and scrolling!A couple of personal observations: One thing that caught my eye and stayed with me while scrolling through the rest was the motion graphic version you start your presentation with. Once your symbol started spinning, it turned into a 3D swastika. Perhaps it was a flirt with eighties metal albums playing backwards, reviling secret messages and such, but I reacted to it, and others might as well. Another thing is that I don’t think your symbol needs the thin highlight lines. The full (colour) blocks give the three-dimensional gravity on their own and the lines kind of messes with the clean and interesting form.
- @William Webb thanks I have updated
- Have you checked your link - I get an error message: Oops! We can’t find that page.
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