Hiya! I've created this artwork for a single cover. Your feedback and what could be improved will be highly appreciated! ☺️
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- Very nice work Laura. I second what others have said and maybe look at the white halo around the hat (think the defringe tool under Matting in Photoshop would sort this).Only other minor thing, I would make the advisory warning a tad smaller.Excited to see what else you produce,Ryan.
- It's great direction, just needs polish. Definitely needs a bit of clean up; the edge of the guy (there's a white line most visible around the hat), and also the overall texture can be a bit more cohesive (super easy way to do this is just adjust the noise and sharpening on the different layers).I would also play with the word placement ("cosmic boy" and "prod by...": can play with the width, sizing, orientation) and play with contrast (specifically curves function) to have a more varied light map.
- I like it. If I was the artist I would approve it. Maybe I would try something to make "prod by..." a little more evident and I will also try to slightly reduce the 'liquify' effect on the "E", but overall it's ok
- @Luke Freeman Thank You Luke! I will give that a try. I see what you mean in regards to the text being close to the clothes, something I will keep in mind! 🙏🏼
- nice direction, only feedback is consider the type to not be close to clothing as the text on the clothing could conflict.Use the top part of the type layout for name and title track. Right side for the prod and Parental Advisory
- @Angelica Colucci Noted! Thank you Angelica! ☺️
- I love the design!! I'd play around with the text a bit more, see what positions work for the parental advisory and fonts that match the artwork.The artwork itself is stunning though!
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