I am new and have written a feature script. It aims to challenge traditional writing ideas, more in my bio. I'd appreciate some feedback!
A high DJ tastes bloodlust when his wife is endangered by the rich, exacting vengeance as drugged, jury and executioner.
A track to die for.
A visual nightmare. Chaotic but organised. Bloody and baffling. Ecstronic is a script that challenges the traditional scriptwriting structure to suit it's unique premise. And it's begging for you to start the track. You've been warned.
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- Happy to have a read or to read through the opening if you would like.
- How does it challenge traditional structure?The logline is cute, but 'the rich' is a bit vague, as is 'endangered', and perhaps you can find another adjective than 'high'. Only because usually people get high, and then they spend at least some period not being high in between. But hard to say, without knowing more about the story.
- @David Morgan Thank you so much! Really appreciate the welcome 🙏
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