Can someone give me feedback on my portfolio? Link below.

Hi there people! I have just updated my portfolio, hence why I need some advice. Please let me know your thoughts on what I can improve and suggestions of how. This can include anything, from navigation to arrangement. www.tamaynehir.com.

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  • @Luke Freeman also to answer your questions it is just a platform to showcase some of my work. I studied Magazine Journalism and Publishing so I have a mixture of written pieces up alongside more visual content since my course was very broad.
  • @Luke Freeman Hi there! Thanks for your contribution. I am actually changing everything at the moment and that is why there is no consistency, all the font sizes are varied etc. I posted this a while back so my portfolio was very different then and more consistent as it was finalised but now I am changing everything again, I’ll admit it’s all over the place. This does remind me however to take my portfolio OFF live mode until I’ve reworked it all! So your comment was definitely helpful.
  • not much consistency between each pages, not clear how the content is laid what is the website function or it’s behaviour.

    Is it meant to be a design portfolio or is it a online zine?

    The typography/type setting is very poor doesn’t work with photography. Consider type usage for your zines brand it to be consistent.
  • Hey Tamay. Hope you are having a great day. Incidentally I recently finished updating my own website (and asked the Dots community for feedback) so can appreciate the hard work that you have put into it. In regards to feedback I would highlight the following points:

    - Perhaps consider rearranging the order of your menu so that the welcome button comes first and the about button comes second.
    - I would maybe look to increase the font size as some sections are quite difficult to read at first glance.

    - Would look to perhaps add your picture or another picture that you like to the homepage just to capture people's attention.

    - Ponder including social icons in the top right of the page so that people can easily visit your pages. Avoids the extra step of having to revisit the homepage to find them.

    That being said I think it is a very good portfolio website. Has definitely inspired me to explore similar styling options in the future.

    Hope that helps
  • Hey I had a quick look and I think it´s really great and love all the images. I think in the welcome and about section the writing could be quite a bit bigger and clearer though as I can´t read it very well.

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